Sunday, November 02, 2008

Lazy Sunday

Warning: NaNoWriMo novelist is in session. Trespassers will be reborn as the inspiration for an ugly and evil race of horrifically disfigured beings and/or the villain.

Well, what a day this has been! I was in bed for pretty much all of it, so I got a lot done.

Um, in theory anyway...

Okay, I admit it. Mostly I was hanging out at impishidea, not doing homework or writing as I had intended to do. I did get some writing done, though. (No homework. : P) (Oh, and I watched this video and laughed heartily.)

Best line in today's work: "'You are coming out of your shell, Ez. I love it.'"

Worst line in today's work: "Ezekiel put away the phone – a normal cell phone in looks, but with special components that allowed him to call home, a slightly different dimension – and looked around." Awkward, clunky, exposition in a terrible place... yeah. Let's remember this is a first draft.

Best lines when taken out of context in today's work: "He hadn’t bothered trying to manipulate anyone for ages." "He hadn’t thought that being a failure could feel so good." That 'best' is sarcastic here, by they way. Really... these lines are almost this bad even in context. They make me giggle with embarrassment. : P

And Fredji is still ahead of me. Curse you!

Days left of NaNo: 28

Word count: 2785

Donations: $0

2 comments:

Fredjikrang said...

Bwahaha! Didn't think you would catch up that easily, did you? ;D

bobtheenchantedone said...

: P